WIP 2005-02-09 - By Katherine Rhodes
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Rude comments? Nope. Helpful and constructive? Definitely!
Thanks for your input. I'm attending to the points you raised, except for
the 'no lid' bit as it is there, but the fact that you can't see it means I
need to sort out the visibility of it! I can't believe I forgot the knife!
No, I'm not a twiddle-til-it-drops modeller, such people should be locked
up! :-) Not sure what to do with the brush though as the bristles are a
scan of my favourite brush which I've been using for about eight years (yep,
it really is that clean!).
I just want to get this put to bed now so I can get on with my KateClay
project! Many thanks for your help.
Best wishes
Kate
> -- --Original Message-- --
> From: Rob Mitchell [mailto:robert@(protected)]
> Sent: 08 February 2005 12:41 PM
> Subject: Re: WIP
>
>
> Kate,
> If I may...
>
> Emery board has no traces of being used, could no with some nice grey
> streaks in the surface grit.
> Ditto for the brushes.
> Open paint tin is far too clean, no paint traces around the rim.
> No lid for opened paint tin?
> Shadowing on the box side needs some attention, tres blocky.
> Box edges look all too sharp, a slight radius there would give a
> move folded
> feel.
> Nice kinks in the box though.
> Maybe a beige-card colour would be better on the box, there is
> already a lot
> of grey in the scene.
> Nice effect on the painted base elements too, paint is
> overlapping onto the
> light grey plastic.
> Glue tube looks like it needs a good squeeze, It's nicely
> wrinkled but it's
> rounded shape doesn't match the wrinkles.
> A knife.. the scene needs a knife or sidecutters, I can't believe
> you are a
> twiddle-until-it-drops-off-the-sprue, type of modeller.
>
> Apart from those personal niggles, gripes and rude comments, it
> looks like
> it's going well.
> Keep up the good work.
>
> Trebs.
>
> www.trebledee.com
> www.vistapan.com
>
> -- -- Original Message -- --
> From: "Katherine Rhodes" <kate.rhodes@(protected)>
> To: <truespace@(protected)>
> Sent: Monday, February 07, 2005 1:23 PM
> Subject: [TSML] WIP
>
>
> > Hi all
> >
> > Just trying to finish off something I started a while back and would be
> > grateful for any comments, critiques, suggestions, etc. It's
> titled 'How
> I
> > Used To Model' and is fairly self explanatory! Two 'problems' that I am
> > aware of are the shadows are a bit streaky as I used ray traced rather
> than
> > mapped just to speed up the test render and the textures and bump on the
> > paint pots are a bit screwy but this goes away with 4X AA, I just used
> > Adaptive for this to speed things up.
> >
> > http://www.katherinerhodes.co.uk/wip
> >
> > I'll be grateful for any feedback.
> >
> > Many thanks in advance
> >
> > Best wishes
> >
> > Kate
> >
>
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