WIP 2005-02-08 - By Rob Mitchell
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Kate,
If I may...
Emery board has no traces of being used, could no with some nice grey
streaks in the surface grit.
Ditto for the brushes.
Open paint tin is far too clean, no paint traces around the rim.
No lid for opened paint tin?
Shadowing on the box side needs some attention, tres blocky.
Box edges look all too sharp, a slight radius there would give a move folded
feel.
Nice kinks in the box though.
Maybe a beige-card colour would be better on the box, there is already a lot
of grey in the scene.
Nice effect on the painted base elements too, paint is overlapping onto the
light grey plastic.
Glue tube looks like it needs a good squeeze, It's nicely wrinkled but it's
rounded shape doesn't match the wrinkles.
A knife.. the scene needs a knife or sidecutters, I can't believe you are a
twiddle-until-it-drops-off-the-sprue, type of modeller.
Apart from those personal niggles, gripes and rude comments, it looks like
it's going well.
Keep up the good work.
Trebs.
www.trebledee.com
www.vistapan.com
-- -- Original Message -- --
From: "Katherine Rhodes" <kate.rhodes@(protected)>
To: <truespace@(protected)>
Sent: Monday, February 07, 2005 1:23 PM
Subject: [TSML] WIP
> Hi all
>
> Just trying to finish off something I started a while back and would be
> grateful for any comments, critiques, suggestions, etc. It's titled 'How
I
> Used To Model' and is fairly self explanatory! Two 'problems' that I am
> aware of are the shadows are a bit streaky as I used ray traced rather
than
> mapped just to speed up the test render and the textures and bump on the
> paint pots are a bit screwy but this goes away with 4X AA, I just used
> Adaptive for this to speed things up.
>
> http://www.katherinerhodes.co.uk/wip
>
> I'll be grateful for any feedback.
>
> Many thanks in advance
>
> Best wishes
>
> Kate
>
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