NewGirl wips 2004-11-18 - By Andrew Paules
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I think you should work on focusing the lighting a bit and trying to draw
the viewer's eye where you want it. In the first image the door at the end
of the hall is definately where the focus of the image is, while the girl
fades away because she's more dimly lit. In your second image, there's not
so much of a contrast, but the girl still gets lost in the overall tone of
the image.
I'd suggest creating a fairly subtle even light for the room, and then
making an array of spotlights that focus light on the girl - not too heavy
handed, but enough to draw the focus of the image to her, if that's what
you're going for.
|andrew|
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>-- -- Original Message -- --
>From: Alexander Shyrokov <mailto:shirokov@(protected)>
>To: truespace@(protected) <mailto:truespace@(protected)>
>Sent: Tuesday, November 16, 2004 9:10 AM
>Subject: Re: [TSML] NewGirl wips
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>Hi, there.
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>I am trying to set the lights properly, and this is what I have so far:
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>http://sjcomp.com/wip/newgirl/hall1.jpg
><http://sjcomp.com/wip/newgirl/hall1.jpg>
>http://sjcomp.com/wip/newgirl/hall2.jpg
><http://sjcomp.com/wip/newgirl/hall2.jpg>
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>Let me know what you think about it.
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>Alexander Shyrokov wrote:
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