Re: sacabon media 2005-05-19 - By Andrew
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I've found your site a little hard to read. This could be because, I
have 1280x1024 resolution on my 19" monitor. It could also be the
font that is used. As mentioned before, there are some fonts like
Verdana which remain readible on-screen even at a very small size.
There is acutally a graphic term for this and a value found 0.00-1.00
that allows you to compare different fonts, but I forgot what that
term is.
The area where you display the results of the menu choices is too
little. The back screen should be as wide as possible because you
want people to take a good, close-up look at your portfolio when that
portion is up. Maybe moving the main menu to either across the top or
the bottom will allow you more "screen" room.
If I'm not mistaken, you've keyframed the whole intro movie with it's
background. Render just the background and have that as a graphic
symbol. Then render the guy walking by himself and stationary to
where he will then sit in the chair. Key frame his movement by motion
tweens to make him "look" like he is crossing the background, also
don't be afraid to use a small repeating clip of his walk to do until
he rearches the chair. This should greatly drop your download time.
The color change on menu selection is nice. I also like the ghostly
image of the guy during the transitions. However, I think you can do
more with this if you made objects appear or disappear in the room to
highlight the subject matter of the choice.
I'm curious as to why you open a new window for the flash presentation
instead of moving to that page from the splash page? A little more
graphic display on the intro-page will get more people interested in
waiting for the download time too.
AWBenson
--- In Carrara@(protected), "pixelits" <mediapixel@(protected)> wrote:
> Hello Guys,
>
> I would like to have some feedbacks on my website. Feel free to
> critize my website. This is a preliminary design. I used poser,
> carrara and flash to create the site.
>
> www.sacabon.com
>
> Thanks,
> Izzy Sacabon
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