Re: WIP image 2005-02-18 - By Andrew
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It's pretty good image. A few things that I would continue to add is
the texturing on the rock. It's very uniform. The underside of the
rock would be dirtier, darker and perhaps even with a little of
moss/mold/plant growth. In short, the rock is noticably too clean.
The lighting aspects isn't bad, but could be more dramatic. Try using
a 3 point lighting scheme, or if you are using the sky light then just
add one spot slightly behind the model to give it a backlighting
effect. If the main light is suppost to be coming from the direction
in front of the model, the shadows that overcast the face (thus
darkening the eyes) need to be mostly removed (through the use of
placing a spot light).
AWBenson
--- In Carrara@(protected), "roadridertoo" <gismc@(protected)> wrote:
>
> I finally got the courage to post an image. It's a begining for my
> first attempt at something creative. Please take a look, and feel
> free to provide constructive critisim or general feedback on the
> image (lighting, texturing, modeling, pose, etc.).
>
> It can be reached via the link below.
> http://tinyurl.com/4mcsy
>
> Thanks in advance for your thoughts (oh, there's a slight problem
> with the sword, didn't see it when setting things up through blurry
> late night vision, but it's clear as can be in the render).
>
> Rich
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