Re: My first real Carrara picture 2004-01-28 - By nospam2
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Bonjour Joe,
Good job !
I just wonder about the structure of the image. Looks a little bit formal,
"flat", soviet-like.
Maybe annother point of view, slightly biaised, would do ?
Just a thought.
Wednesday, January 28, 2004, 12:53:45 PM, you wrote:
AT> Great work Joe!
AT> A few nits -
AT> 1) leaves are too regular on hanging plant
AT> 2) doorknob.. man, get some brasso on that thing!
AT> 3) the picture to the left is a bit confusing - is it a window? A picture?
AT> An opening to a tiled shower stall? I think it's supposed to be a picture of
AT> a window but it confuses the scene a little.
AT> 4) what's that white thing peeking out from the right side of the opening to
AT> the bathroom?
AT> 5) I think it's a function of the renderer but the inside top of the
AT> bathroom doorframe looks like it has some lighting issues - the sides are
AT> relatively dark and the top is really bright; this can possibly be remedied,
AT> if it's not a geometry issue, with a small point light.
AT> But really nice stuff!
AT> Andrew
AT> From: "joe_ashear" <j16@(protected)>
AT> Reply-To: Carrara@(protected)
AT> Date: Wed, 28 Jan 2004 11:31:49 -0000
AT> To: Carrara@(protected)
AT> Subject: [Carrara] My first real Carrara picture
AT> I've posted my first "real" Carrara picture (as opposed to just goofing off
AT> with
AT> features) over at Renderosity.
AT> http://www.renderosity.com/viewed.ez?galleryid=590832&Sectionid=6
AT> I think you have to be registered to see it.
AT> Comments are welcome, I guess, but I don't know if I'll be doing any more
AT> work on
AT> that picture... one's gotta move on.
AT> - Joe
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