Pern Christmas 2003-12-04 - By dfroude
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Scott, Not bad but you do need to work a bit on the details.
The floor is a bit too shiny, tone down the reflections a bit also and a
slight bump map to it you might even want to find a better texture for
the floor that has grout lines. Perhaps even create individual tiles.
The couch needs a bit of work as well, the back of the couch should be
flat, right now it looks like the individual cushions make up the back
of the couch.
The walls need some detail added to them specifically baseboards, really
adds some realism and softens the hard edges at the floor on that note
perhaps even some crown moulding.
The lighting needs some work as well, think about how you want to light
you scene, instead of the lights on the ceiling which don't seem to work
very well, maybe create some pot lights, or some lamps, also the TV
could be a light source, maybe a window out of site is giving off light,
think about what the mood will be and try and create that. The light is
too even and the shadows are to definite try using shadow maps and see
how that looks.
This is an old scene I did a while back and maybe it will help out a bit
http://www.daybe.com/wip/music-room.jpg
http://www.daybe.com/wip/music-room2.jpg
Dave
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